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[Bob punching a robot]

I mean... at least try to sync up the punching sound with the actual punches.

[Respect all life]

The fact that you made the story telling only visual is a +. But the story itself is IMO kinda cliché, don't you think?

Animation critique:
I would advise you to look at your pacing a little bit closer. your charachters legs were getting all over the place tho I think this was because you made this with a mouse, if this is not the case try to make some cleaner lines next time, or maybe do the keyframes first and then the inbetweens (I can't really tell if you've done that or not). Also, you need to use your layers a little bit better. I'm not sure if this is true but I think you've accidentaly drawn your charachter on the background layer (or vice versa) or maybe you made a new ground line every few frames which I cannot explain myself.

Even if the most important thing about this is the story I really wanted to incourage you to not lazy-out on animation. Animation is IMO a very cool skill to have and the better your animation is the easier it is to understand the story. So please even if you're not good yet, shoot for the moon and if you miss you'll land by the stars.

-PV

ruh1203 responds:

Thank you for your recommendations! Yes you were right i made this animation with a mouse beacause i dont have anything else. I made this animation a long time ago and in that time i was a beginner at animating. I didnt knew anything about layers, or symbols.Thank you for your advices!

[Comfortable]

This is nice.

CapaciousSpace responds:

No u

[Zechariahs Theme [AlterSelf]]

Most of the lines seem to be made with a line tool and then bent a little. IMO it's better to try to draw the charachter even if you don't have a graphics tablet. It atleast gives you some training.
Same thing for the tweened motion. Also please look at how hands work. Nobody holds their things with their thumb on the bottom and the rest of the fingers on top. I guess the movement of the hands isn't /that/ bad but it's atleast improvable.

Because I'm gonna assume that the music is the main part of this I'm gonna rate it with that in mind. Goodluck with your future projects.

-PV

["Fail Hard Episode 2-The Last Slice" - Animated Short]

Not bad. Could need a little more flowing animation and clean lines.

CaptainThinker responds:

Thank you so much will try that for sure!

[Donald Trump grabs the pussy.]

Wow this makes more sence than his actual speech good job XD

PS: I would more likely vote for him if he was like that XD

tonyfamous responds:

Thanks. :-)